I don't care if I get pushed around by those idiots who think I cant rap, cuz' I know I can rap from the heart, like right now, this is all from the heart. If you dont like my rap, then go cry in your f---in' corner. I know I can rap, even if the color of my skin is white. Everytime I start to rap its like im on a flight, rulin' the air like theres no tommorow. Then again, sometimes I stop writing these raps and fall asleep. But RIGHT NOW im goin' to wright this rap with no-one disturbing the f--- outta me. Undoubtely im writin' this rap.These words are commin to me like tip-tap.
If they are, I know this is from the heart. That last part was about the heart, but now im writin' these lyrics down and I don't even know what I'm sayin'! You guys are gonna start payin' for all you have done to me. When you said those thing's 'bout me I heard voices in my head sayin' "Give up, Give up" but no, im gonna Live up, Live up. I'm makin' this rap, and that next one "Hurt" as a Comeback, to show you guys that I can rap. Now im gonna go flip on my cap, and walk those streets with my chin held high. I have Confidence now. Im so proud, I finally got this map figured out without a doubt. I feel like I could just shout with joy, Just like a kid that got a new toy.
Definate Eminem influence. I only have one problem, who's life are you rapping about? Eminem raps about his life, which is pretty heavy stuff. Is this an actual summary of your life? If it isn't, it's not a good thing, so don't pretend like it is.
accepted, reason: This is good. You've done a good job coming up with this rap. It's a good way to get the message across other then the everyday, old, mundane essay versions.